((Perhaps they saw it and just didn't respond to it? That's the third time i've seen something incredibly similar to that post, don't copy paste...))
Aaron held his breath as more of the demons arrived, and watched as the cloud disappeared. His heart pounding he realised that he was still holding his breath, and gulped in the air, looking for the one that appeared to have taken an interest in him. He coughed heavily, wretchedly, like having a tickle in his throat. Then it started, a dull throbbing in his mind, he kneaded his forhead for a second, before letting out a cry of pain, then the rest of his body felt funny, he tried moving forward, one leg lifting and travelling forward, before just staying there, as he fell to the ground, tears beginning to well in his eyes something began to dawn to Aaron Gillard, the final thought he ever really had really.
It was a frightening one, not something anyone ever really wanted to think, or realise, and he would've been much better off if he'd just continued, for the seconds that remained, in blissful unawareness. As his systems began to shut down, he felt his heart stop, start, go into overdrive, clammer, then stop for a final time, as the thought left his mind. It's in me, was the thought, and with that. He died.
Not a second to soon, as what followed could only be described as macabre, and with my good intentions, and responsibility as a writer, i'll leave it at "He exploded," it efficiently sums up what happened, and the results were horrific, one carriage, now red and pink, with it all over everyone and thing in the carriage. What was it? Well, it was him.