Re: Diagon Alley Shops and How to Own One

by Manamie Tanaka Tue Mar 22, 2011 5:36 pm

fixed it, hopefully its better khaat?

by **Khaat Lupin** Tue Mar 29, 2011 10:31 pm

Its still too long. Take a look at Sparks menu for ideas.

You can only have 5 main catagories in your menu. At this point it looks like you have the following catagories:

Lunch, Main Meal, Kids Menu, Grill Menu, Salads and Soups, Evening Meal, Sushi, Drinks, and Alcoholic Beverages.

That makes a total of 9 catagories. You need 5 catagories and one price for each catagory. As I said, take a look at Sparks to give you some ideas. Let me know if you need help.

k.

by Manamie Tanaka Mon Apr 04, 2011 7:58 pm

khatt is sitll too long let me know.

by **Khaat Lupin** Mon Apr 04, 2011 10:59 pm

Ok, the menu is still massive. It needs to be waaaay shorter.

Make it clear that you have 5 catagories only, no more than that.

You may only have 1 price for each catagory. You still seem to have multiple catagories and multiple prices within those catagories.

Dont forget that, for example, if someone comes in with children, that for the most part those will be NPC's. You have the ability to cut the price, or if there are two children to let them order one entree and then divide it between the two children. Also, most players will not know what all these menu items are. You might want to stick to some of the more common items so that it attracts more players. You can specify, with just a mention, that special items can be made by the chef upon request.

Does that make any sense at all?

k.

by **Jessie Tyler** Mon May 09, 2011 4:59 pm

Name and Type of Shop: Madam Malkin's Robes for All Occasions
Location: Diagon alley next to Flourish and Blotts
Items & Price:

Diagon Alley Shops and How to Own One - Page 3 Madammalkins

A shop in Diagon Alley where all the Students get their Hogwarts school uniforms and wizards and witches can also purchase dress robes, travelling cloaks, and the like.

As all of our uniforms are custom made, you simply have to choose what you wish and place your order.

PRICE LIST

Hogwarts school clothing

Full Uniform - 7 galleons
Includes one white shirt, one sweater, one tie, pleated skirt or pants (optional), knee socks and robes.
Quidditch Uniform - 7 galleons
(Includes Quidditch Robes, pants and sweater )
House sweaters – 2 galleons
Quidditch Sweater - 2 galleons
White Shirt - 2 galleons
Pleated Skirt - 2 galleons
Black Pants - 2 galleons
Knee Socks - 2 sickles
Witch Hat - 1 galleon 5 sickles
House Tie - 7 sickles
House Emblem - 5 sickles
Dress Robes - 7 galleons
Winter Cloak - 9 galleons

Summer Clothing

Woman's spaghetti strap tops – 3 galleons
Casual trousers - 2 galleons
Skirts in various lengths and colors--2 galleons
Men's swimming trunks – 2 galleons
Ladies swimwear -1 galleon
Summer head wear – 2 galleons
Formal summer dresses - 3 galleons
Summer Dresses - 2 galleons

Winter Clothing

Warm lined cloaks – 3 galleons
Hooded Jackets – 4 galleons
Fully lined ladies trousers - 2 galleons
Fully lined men's trousers – 3 galleons
Thermal gloves -2 galleons
Winter wraps – 3 galleons
Winter Formal Dresses - 6 galleons
Winter dresses - 3 galleons

Shoes

Ladies Formal Heels – 3 galleons
Men's Formal – 3 galleons
Ladies flat sandals – 2 galleons
(summer only)
Men and Ladies boots -3 galleons
(winter olny)
Men and Ladies court shoes – 2 galleons

Accessories
Necklaces – 5 sickles
Earrings – 5 sickles
Cufflinks - 3 sickles
Socks
(knee high) – 6 sickles
Socks
(Ankle high) – 3 sickles
Scarfs – 2 sickles
Tie's - 1 sickle
Formal Tie's - 3 sickles

by **Khaat Lupin** Thu May 12, 2011 10:03 pm

accepted and added. please change your job for jess to owner of madam malkins instead of black raven bookstore.

by Aaron Marcheti Sun Oct 02, 2011 4:54 am

Name and Type of Shop: Marcheti's Wands
Location: Diagon Alley
Items & Price: Wands will be priced individually based on the type.

by **Khaat Lupin** Tue Oct 11, 2011 11:33 pm

Aaron, I would suggest you make 5 basic catagories of wands and prices. You could classify them by perhaps common wands, rare woods, rare cores, personalized wands, special orders, etc. Something like that. Price each catagory so that there is at least some basic idea of what you have to offer and what the typical price range is. It also is valuable in that it tells others about your character's skills as a wandmaker. If you need help, please let me know.

k.

by Aaron Marcheti Tue Oct 11, 2011 11:59 pm

Oh no I got it. I was just unsure of what you wanted me to put in this category. Ill get it all fixed up for ya.

by **Khaat Lupin** Wed Oct 12, 2011 12:00 am

ok. good to see another shop opening!!

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