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Post by Guest Fri Feb 15, 2008 7:28 pm

I will come up with more today, i just have to think of all of it
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Post by Ginevra Malenki Fri Feb 15, 2008 7:35 pm

Okay, I'll make sure I read it, your an awesome writer Brianna, and I love reading other peoples stories Very Happy
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Post by Guest Sat Feb 16, 2008 12:24 am

Chapter Two: D-Day

Brianna woke up. Tired, she looked at the clock, she could sleep in today because she didn't start her mission until seven in the evening. She forgot all about the mission until she laid eyes upon the photo of the young man she was to assassinate, when she laid eyes upon the photo, a strange feeling washed over her, what she thought was a feeling of imminent doom. Her mindset at the moment was that she was going to be killed, her heart pounded and raced with great anxiety. She got out of bed and had a large breakfast of a stack of pancakes, as she had a thought that this would be her last breakfast ever. Brianna put on her best dress and her coat, she then headed to a tavern outside of town. Once inside, she headed for a deserted table in the corner, she looked around to see happy groups of people celebrating, she then ordered a firewhiskey which she drunk in large gulps. She left the tavern slightly buzzed, but she wasn't drunk by any means. Brianna took a stroll down the road, she nervously went into a tent, in which lived a Seer, who then approached her and rambled on about random stuff. She nervously backed away from the tent. At quarter to seven, Brianna took her purse and took out the invisibility cloak, draping it on herself, she then headed to Squared Manor, wand and instruction sheet in hand, she headed into a very thick rhododendron bush and waited for the meeting to begin, she found a notebook and pencil in the tavern earlier and had packed it so she could report what she heard.


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Post by Ginevra Malenki Sat Feb 16, 2008 12:27 am

Awesome Job Brianna, it's really interesting !
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Post by Guest Sat Feb 16, 2008 1:10 am

Chapter 3: The Mission

The Listen-In

Brianna was hiding in the bush when she heard a loud crowd of people going inside the manor, she decided that once everyone was in she'd go inside and hide wherever she could that she wouldn't be seen. Once all members were inside, she cast a silencing charm on herself to silence her footsteps and pencil scratching against paper, and she sneaked inside, looking around the manor until she found a great spot to listen in and not be seen or heard. She hid behind a large fountain in the foyer, located right beside the door to the basement where the meetings were held. She searched into her purse and found, by accident, an extendable ear and she planted it in an opportune place. Listening in, she picked up some of the conversation "The Auror office will be bombed five days from now at 11 in the morning, giving us time to prepare the explosives and to plant them, I will be disguised as an Auror to be so I can plant these devices once I'm in, supposedly training, they will never know what hit them" Alexander said. Brianna wrote key points down. Then Alexander talked extensively about the bomb and it's structure so his henchmen could build it, she took key notes from this as well.

The Kill

Brianna heard the meeting end as the people left the building, Alexander then wandered around his house a bit, first to the fridge where he took out a cold slice of pizza and ate it, then brushed his teeth, then he put his wand on a rack in the basement and went to his bedroom. Brianna followed Alexander into these places and observed closely. Brianna crept close to Alexander in his bed, she threw her cloak off and aimed her wand at his neck to sever his head with a Sectumsempra spell. Just then, Alexander woke up to see her towering over him, wand pointed at his throat. He was unarmed but still dangerous, he grabbed her hand, but then stopped, Brianna stopped struggling and she looked into his eyes as he looked into hers. Alexander smiled as he suddenly leaned in to kiss a confused Brianna on the lips. "I know you are an Auror and I'm a Rebel, but I think I'm falling for you" Alexander said, looking into her eyes. Brianna was taken aback, then she said "You can have me as your partner in life, but you have to do one thing", "Anything for you, my love" he said vacantly, "you must become good, you must become an Auror as well, and I will keep a close eye on you, as I recorded your conversation with your group" Brianna said, packing her notes in her purse. Then Alexander said "I will, I will become an Auror, I will start tomorrow, and I have something I want to ask," then he dug into his nightstand and pulled out a velvet box, he opened it and inside was the most beautiful diamond ring Brianna ever laid eyes upon, "will you marry me" he said to her, Brianna then said "of course, I was waiting my entire life for this moment, but I didn't expect it'd be with you", Brianna decided that that night, she'd sleep at Squared Manor.


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Post by Adebola Adeagbo Sat Feb 16, 2008 3:33 am

Brianna you said mine's is better then yours. But yours is really great.
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Post by Guest Sat Feb 16, 2008 3:40 am

wow, thank you, your fan fic is actually better in my opinion, because it seems that you had more experience with them, my fan fic isn't over yet though,it seems like it is but it isnt
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Post by Adebola Adeagbo Sat Feb 16, 2008 3:44 am

No it's because it took me 3 years for me to finish. So I finished it yesturday and I post it here today. This is the first Fan Fic I ever did in my life.
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Post by Guest Sat Feb 16, 2008 3:50 am

THREE YEARS!!!!!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! I thought it would've taken at the most, 3 and a half. It's very good, keep up the good work posting it
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Post by Adebola Adeagbo Sat Feb 16, 2008 4:03 am

There's 29 chapters to my story. It was worth 3 years though
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