LYNN, Kaede Lena

alrighty!

May I suggest you move away from portraying the character similarly to how Cassie was? Make her her own person, don't just take Cassie out of Skins and put her on PA. You could use her as a model, I suppose, just give her more substance. Uhm. And not drugs. As in character, I meant..erm.. *walks away awkwardly*

lol, its done now

Righto, I'll read over it now for you.

Mmmkay, so just some little things that popped out to me.
1. She's only 16, so she can't be an Auror, I'm afraid, not until she's a graduate
2. How old was her sister when she died? That's important for me to know
3. If her sister went to Hogwarts with her, it would be fairly difficult to keep her as a secret, as ghosts can't turn invisible or visible at will in the HP universe.
4. I wouldn't have said anything, but as long as you're already making changes, is there any chance that you could include some dialogue in your RP sample?

Otherwise I do like the look of the character. Based on personality I'm more inclined to think Ravenclaw, I think, because of her likes, and because of her perceptive nature, would you agree with that?

Finished-

Alright! We've held you up long enough but she looks ready to go! Have fun rp-ing!

Accepted and sorted into Hufflepuff!