JONES-FERNANDEZ, Alexander

Hey. Sorry. Just one more thing. Being able to solve mysteries isn't a weakness. Just make something a little more... weak... in order to make him less invincible.

DONE ONCE AGAIN!

My only problem with this character is the fact that he doesn't actually have weaknesses, Louis. He doesn't, I'm putting that frankly to you. Family hardly counts as a weakness, girls never counts and name-calling is more of a pet-peeve. You need to think of his downfalls. You need to remember that weaknesses make the character and that actually, strengths are nothing. Strengths are the result of weaknesses. If we weren't flawed then we would not seek to better ourselves. It is the same for characters. Flaws are fun, remember that. I find that the weaknesses part is the easiest part of the app. You can't have a perfect character - it just doesn't work that way. Give his weaknesses a bit of thought. He needs real ones, not superficial ones that neither make sense and are easy to overcome. Also, can you please cut down on the capital letters? They're really unnecessary.

I'll edit tommorow

Done once again.

Accepted and sorted into Hufflepuff