CHARCOVIX, Sora

Introduction
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FULL NAME: Sora Charcovix

NICK NAME: Sora

AGE: 11

ALLEGIANCE: hogwarts

HOGWARTS HOUSE: Gryffindor , Ravenclaw

WAND TYPE: 12 1/2 'in Rose Wood

PLAY BY: Sora
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APPEARANCE
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HAIR COLOR: Brown

EYE COLOR: Blue eyes

HEIGHT: 5'6

BODY TYPE: slender

GENERAL DESCRIPTION: Sora always has a sweater on. He is very healthy and he loves to make people laugh and do funny faces. He loves wearing gloves all the time,it makes him very comfortable with wherever he is. He loves to go to his friends and hang out with him. He always try to fear nothing and trys finish his goal and make a good friendship. Every time Sora doesn't have anything to do he falls a sleep most of the time.
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PERSONALITY:
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CHARACTER'S STRENGTH AND SKILLS:

Good with magic spells

Brave when there is trouble

when he casts a spell,it could go pretty far

CHARACTER'S WEAKNESS:

Failing things

Using dark magic

Death eaters

CHARACTER'S LIKES:

Good friendship

Battles and quests

People that never give up

Fair battles

CHARACTER'S DISLIKES:

Cheaters

People that give up easliy on you

Doing nothing

Slytherin

CHARACTER'S GOALS:

Go to Gryffindor

Finish all years

Get good friends

Learn many magic

QUIRKS:

He starts biting this nails when he is nevrous or bored.

BOGGART: Ghosts

PATRONUS: hanging out with his brother Xemnas at the beach

DEMENTOR: When he heard that his parents died

AMORENTIA: The smell of the cake

MIRROR OF ERISED: Good friends in Gryffindor.

PERSONALITY:Sora is always active and always trys to be brave. He loves magic and to talk and hang out with his friends. He likes to make people laugh and make funny faces. When his friends are in trouble he always would try to help them out . But he always likes to learn new magic spells and learn difference things all the time.

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------FAMILY & POSSESSIONS

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FATHER: Terra Charcovix--(deceased)

MOTHER: Aqua Charcovix--(deceased)

SIBLINGS: Xemnas Charcovix (twin)

OTHER: (none)

BLOOD STATUS: pure blood

RACE: Human

SOCIAL STATUS: Wealthy

PETS: none

BROOM STICK:none

OTHER POSSESSIONS: none

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------CHARACTER"S HISTORY

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EARLY YEARS: Sora was born in a peaceful place on his hometown.At the age of 3 he already started talking and went to pre-school.But most of his fun was held at the beach.But one day when he was 5 he's parents got into a car accident and died.His older sibling Xemnas had to take care of him.Ever since then Sora has gotten more braver and more stronger.In his elementary school,there was many kids getting bullied,and one day he decided to stick up for them.At first he was nervous himself but eventually he got everyone to respect each other.Because of this he was even more popular than he's brother in elementary school.But he was ok with that.

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------BEHIND THE CHARACTER

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------YOUR NAME: Sora

RP EXPERIENCE:(none)

HOW YOUR FOUND US:Xemnas told me about the website.

OTHER CHARACTER:Sora,(none)

RP SAMPLE: After Sora finshing his work he went to the trophy room to assist Xemnas."Hi Xem how is your dentention going" said Sora. Sora tooked a sponge and started to polishing the trophy. After they finish he informed the teacher that Xemnas finished polishing the trophy. Then he said to Xemnas that he was leaving.

You need to state two houses, also I think he may be too much like the videogame character. Think you could give him an original personality? His experiences are also too similar to the game; could you change them so they fit more into the Harry Potter Universe as well?

ok done I fixed it.How about now ?

I'd like to see you fix your coding on your app, as well, please.

Thanks.

K.

Also how is he younger brother to Xemnas if Xemnas is older because in Xemnas's app it says hes eleven in yours it says your fifteen also how come yur brother , mom, dad have all diffrent last names.

Also if he was born in 95 he'd be 27. The site is set in the year 2022!

ok all that has been changed I hope

Can I give you just a couple of suggestions to consider?

First, your app is getting a lot better. Nice work. Its shaping up nicely.

Second. Xemnas is 11 as well. Perhaps you two should be twins. There are identical twins and there are also "non-identical." You two would not have to look alike at all. But you both need to be at least 11 to start at Hogwarts. So you need to either be the same age or older, since Xem is already 11. Whatever you choose will impact your history for your character a bit.

Third, you might want to consider if you want to list what the core of your wand is. You don't have to, but if you want to do that, now is the time.

Next, what do you mean, under your character skills by "good range"? And is there a particular reason he wears gloves constantly? Is it simply because he thinks it looks cool? he's going to be perhaps looked at by others because they will not be wearing gloves all the time. you might want to know in advance why he does that.

Also, please mark on your application, beside each parent's name, that they are deceased. For example: Terra Charovix--(deceased).

Do these suggestions help?

Khaat

these suggestions really do help.Umm I think I fixed those problems,how about now ? lol

you've fixed everything but one thing. how is xemnas older but yet you're both 11? solve that, and I'll accept it. the only way that is going to work at this point, since xem is 11, is if you're twins or if you're adopted. i don't see another way.

k.