THOMAS L PACHINO

O U T O F C H A R A C T E R
Name: (Thomas L Pachino)
Gender: (Male)
Any other characters on Potter's Army: (Harry Potter)
Age: (17)
How you found Potter's Army: ( Awesome.)
Have your read the Plot?: (yes)
Have your read the Must read threads?: (yes i have)

B A S I C I N F O R M A T I O N

Name: (tomz)
Gender: (male.)
Race: (Human)
Blood Status: (Half-blood.)
Year AND Age: (Year 11 age 16.)
Preferred houses: (Graduate.)
Canon or Original: (Canon.)
Play-by: (Bily Gilman.)

A P P E A R A N C E
Height: (Tall.)
Hair: (Black, Thick Straight Hair)
Eye colour: (Dark Brown.)
Skin: (Olive oil, Brown Skin.)
General Appearance: (Well i'm in the middle, i'm was adoptedf, very fast runner, short black hair scars on my right arm.)

P E R S O N A L I T Y
Skills: (Sing,Run and Read people's mind.)
Weaknesses: (Love,Friendship,families.)
Likes: (Draw, graphic designing, and play football.)
Dislikes: (argueing, pumpkin and baseball.)
Motto: (Don't Judge the book under its cover.)
General Personality: ( I'm a quiet sort of a person, have a big family and have 5 cats.. atm.. so yer.. born in a different country, being to live in an adopted family, have good friends that i talk too.)

H I S T O R Y
Family Information: (Mum & Dad, 3 sisters &.)
Childhood: (Being Adopted.. and being able to go to another safe, healthy country)
Hogwarts: (I prefer to be graduate cuz.. itreally cool, and anyway i nearly finish high school so there's no point of being a first year...)
Adulthood: (Be famous, and hopefully become a teacher.)

Short Roleplay: (Um i'm not sure.)

Tom, You have a great start on your character. I edited your post to help you. I put the rest of the character biography here for you to complete. Keep working on it. Keep filling in your answers to the questions, and I'll keep an eye out for you to help you get through this first bit. This sometimes feels like the hardest part of getting started, but we'll help you through it!

Good work so far!

Khaat

Thankx but what do i do now??

You haven't got nearly enough there, Tom.
You need A PARAGRAPH minimum for General Personality and Appearance.
You need two each for Childhood, Hogwarts and adulthood.
Good otherwise though.. you just need to bulk it out.

Tom, the first section on the application, the Out of Character info, is about you. The rest of the application is supposed to be information about your character. Please go back and make sure that it says what you want it to say. You have listed your character's skin color as olive or brown, yet your avatar is caucasian and fair skinned. Please double check that and the rest of your application.

Khaat

oh okk..sure