Tori McLean (edited)

Out of Character:
Name: Janet
Gender: Female
Age: 11
How you found Potter's Army:On Fourmation the site
[b]Any other characters on Potter's Army:First One
[b]Anything else:Well I liked the movie the first and Prisoner of Azkaban

In Character


[b]Name: Tori McLean
Nicknames: Terri
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Year AND Age: 14 fourth year
Preferred houses: Griffyindor,Hufflepuff
Birthday: September 16th
Canon or Original: Idk
Play-by: Debby Ryan
Blood Status: Muggle Born

Height: 6ft 4in
Hair: Straight
Eye colour: Brown Eyes
Skin: Cacausion
Other distinguishing features: none

Personality: She's a shy girl but in the inside she's tough,brave,and confedient.Tori is always with others most of the time at Hogwarts when around friends she's not shy or anything she's confiedient in her own way.When it comes to the temperd one she goes crazy when they make fun of her and her friends gets very mad.She's mostly is quiet all of time when studying and at classes dosen't talk much.At a game of Quidditch she's mostly tough and brave.
Skills: Flying her broom,Cooking,Singing
Weaknesses: Dancing,Playing a insterment,looking girly
Likes: Art,Magic,and Music
Dislikes: Bullies,Ghosts,and Trolls
Motto: none
Family Information: Can't remember her parents ever since she was a baby ever since she was seprated from her mom and dad.Now she used to live with her cousins at America.When she was 10 they told what her parents look like.And the story when she was born.She's was adopted by her aunt who wants to spoil her but it dosen't work on her she dosen't want to be a snobby girl.Her Parents are still living somewhere in U.S. so she's trying to know what their names are.
Background:Tori was always ready for Hogwarts praticing her magic everyday so she can can great at it.She never understants Ghosts or Trolls anymore she just scared of them.Usally she's known as teacher's pet because she always helps her professor out and started to study spells to get more smarter and learning spells quickly so she can prepared for a fight or competetion for her.
Short Roleplay: Tori walked in the classroom''C'mon Terri you can do it''she whispered she walked in who knew she was the first on here.''Wow none is here yet maybe I should study''said Tori in a few hours later she heard someone coming ''Who is it''she said the mysterious person opens the door Tori got scared.

You can't use the surname potter, sorry.

Also, you need to specify 2 houses, and the background needs to be longer.

is this what your looking for?Just edited it

He meant that background,family information,perosnalitty and short roleplay have to be a bit longer aswell/

Oh right....

Now its good =)

Accepted and sorted into Gryffindor.