A new applcation

[b]Out Of Character:
Name:Jeffery Potter
Nicknames:none
Gender:Male
Race: Human
Age:18
How you found Potter's Army:my cousin
Any other characters on Potter's Army:None
Anything else:I share an IP

In Character

Name: Jeffery Potter
Nicknames:None
Gender:male
Wizard or Muggle:Wizard
Year AND Age: 18,Graduated
Preferred houses:Um do I really have to fill this out
Birthday: 2002
Canon or Original:Orginal
Play-by: Rupert Grint
Blood Status: Pure

Height:5,8
Hair:brown
Eye colour:Brown
Skin:Caucasiun
Other distinguishing features:none

Personality: He is Evil Mean and abnouxnauis
Skills: Flying,Charms,Avada Kevdara
Weaknesses: Remembering things,doing what people tell him to do,People
Likes: Death Eaters,Slytherns,Voldemort,Food
Dislikes:Ootp,Gryiffendors,DA members
Motto: none
Family Information: everybody in his famly is dead
Background: He was raised by Voldemort
Short Roleplay: "Hi"Jeffery said walking some more

Can you change these things please:
Fill in the OOC with your actual name and age. I doubt you're called Jeffery Potter in real life.
How is people a weakness? Can you explain it please.
In your likes and dislikes you can only count people once, listing many groups does not count. Please fill out more.
You still have family, even if they are dead. Can you fill out the information about your parents before they died? Also I doubt that every single person in your family is dead. You must have cousins, aunts or someone. If you had nobody then your character would be an emotional wreck.
Also, just pointing out, we ask you to post a paragraph per post when you roleplay, but you have only written one line there. I know it's hard for an example, but in threads describe things around you, your characters feelings, etc.

Anyway, aside from that, welcome to the site =))

Jeffery is Jess's real name too.

^This isn't Jess!! This is...well IP check him and find out. Besides nobody's surname is Potter nowadays.

Also, change your surname, were not accepting anymore potters unless there canon.