Well i havent thot of a good name yet, but im certain that this fanfic will be great
my sis started it but she got bored of wrighting it so i took over
(the story is an alternative story line, of what if wormtail had taken Harry directly to Lord Voldemort. He would have grown up with death eaters and been evil)
Chapter 1 (The traitor)
Lily held up Harry looking at him while he giggled. She was marveling how much he looked like his father. The untidy hair, same nose and mouth.
"Thank god you have my eyes," she said gazing into Harry's bright green eyes.
Just then suddenly there was a noise outside the door. Lily reacted quickly whipping out her wand as 2 figures entered the door.
One was relatively tall and handsome, had a small mustache and beard, and sleaky black hair. The other was short, plump and looked like a rat, with bulging eyes, he looked more nervous then ever. Lily recognized them of course, they were James' old friends, Peter and Sirius.
"Ugh do u always have too scare the hell out of me?" Lily asked angrily
"No, didn't James tell you we were coming?" Sirius said
"Well since he always forgets everything, no and have you ever heard of knocking?"
Sirius was spared the lecture when a man with very untidy hair and 3 bottles of firewhisky came walking down the stairs.
"Padfoot, Wormtail! How are ya guys!?" James shouted handing them each a bottle, although it was evident that neither of them were great. Sirius looked very tired and Peter looked scared and frightened.
"Been on some auror business, Voldemort and his lackeys giving us some trouble," Sirius said to James, then looked at Lily "Can you give us some snacks its been a long journey"
"Sure, here take Harry," Lily said handing Harry to Sirius, Harry instantly cuddled in his godfathers arms.
Lily walked to the kitchen and fetched a few cauldron cakes, it was only when she started walking back did she realize there was something wrong. The living room had gone slient, which was rare as Sirius was present. Half running to the room she saw a dreadful sight. James and sirius were lying on the floor unconscious. Lily's eyes traveled to Peter who was standing by the door with his wand pointing at her, but what was really frightening wa that he had Harry in her arms.
"Im sorry Lily," he said tears spilling down his shirt.
She took out her wand but at that time there was already a flash of red light and she lay on the floor unconcious.
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