Using her free hand Maddison turned Mason's paper toward her, she carefully read through each sentence, occasionally jotting down notes in the margins.
As she read, she couldn't help but smile at Mason's enthusiasm for the subject. She knew that he was passionate about charms and she was determined to help him showcase that in his writing.
Maddison paused at certain points to ask Mason questions or suggest changes to the wording. She wanted to make sure that his ideas were coming across clearly and effectively.
"Hey, Mason, I really like this paragraph," she said, pointing to a section where he had explained the benefits of using bubble headed charms underwater.Maddison continued reading, occasionally chuckling at some of the witty comments he had included in his paper.
Overall, Maddison was impressed with Mason's work. She could see the potential for it to be even better with just a few tweaks. "You're really onto something here, Mason," she said, handing back the paper with her edits. "With a bit of polishing, this could be top-notch."