Detention: For dueling in the Prefect Bathroom

Professor Jess nodded at Nikki and stared pointedly at the other 2

Andrian got s piece of parchment, a bottle of ink and a quilt to write with "One reason why..." he trailed off as he dipped his quilt into his bottle of ink and began to write slowly and taking his time as he thought of good words to use.

((I want 500 words, posted here. I will ount it personally, give or take 10%))

Nick wrote his paper and gave it to Jess "Sorry" He said to Jess


I duled in the Prefects bathroom today what I did wrong was go into a place I wasent allowed to go into and started a duel and lost House points for Gryiffendor and hurt Andrian I learned that sometimes you should stay where your susposed to go and mind your own bissness and I also Argued with a Professer and I shouldent have because you shouldent Argue with a Professer I could have gotten suspended or expelled the next time I will think about what I do before I do it I could have gotten a more worse punishment than this but my Professer decided to make me write this When I broke the rules I was a discrace to the Gryiffendors before me and the ones in Hogwarts right now and a discrase to Godric Gryiffendor the founder of Gryiffendor I just want to say sorry to a few people Professor Jess Potter and Headmaster Shacklebolt and Andrian for hurting him sorry to those 3 who I just said there name

Professor Jess read the essay and counted the words and frowned. "It's good, and i think you got the point, but it didn't reach the word limit by far, you need more words, and i'm tempted to send it back and ask for more." He told Nick, frowning, but not angry

"Whould you like me to redo it Professor" He asked Jess

(:rolleyes:)

One of the reason, The things i have done wrong today in the Prefect Bathroom was that i attacked, Nick back out of anger and i've learned it was stupid and idiotic thing to do to fight your friends over a girl and ended up breaking the bathroom apart.
Another thing i did wrong in the Prefect Bathroom was enter the bathroom without any permission from either the teachers or the headmaster themselve and just entered when i was not allowed.
I would like to say sorry to my friend Nick for hurting and bashing him up with numerous of spells, i shouldn't have hurted my fellow house members and i would also like to say sorry to the founder of Gryffindor, Godric Gryffindor i have dissapointed him.

Andrian Potter

Andrian walked over to the table and placed the essay on the table looking at him with a hard stern stare, "Here you go "Professor"" he said, his voice fighting to remain calm and casual because he didn't like the teacher then turned around to face Nick Potter "Meet you in the boys dormitories" he whispered then waited to be dismissed

Nick just looked over at Nikki who was still writeing her paper

((I copy-pasted it into Word, and word counted it, it said there were 172 words Nick, not 500 Andrian, i did the same and you only did 130. Both your essays did not reach the required word count))
Professor Jess read Andrian's essay and counted the words and shook his head. "I want both your essays re-written and for themto reach the 55 word count. Get to it," he said, shocked that both of them'd not reached their word count

Andrian growled at him angrily then took another parchment from his table and started to rewrite his essay sitting way behind the others away from the teacher of course, "Let see if i can remember the last hundred and thirty words" he thought to himself tapping his quilt on the table while it was empty