RICE, Sophia Elizabeth

Okay, Liz,

We've all been eager to try to lend a hand so that we can get Sophia up and accepted as soon as possible. And, generally, all us admins feel similarly about how to sort the applications--which is why sometimes we'll all jump in. So, my apologies for any confusion.

I read your app initially, asked you to make changes and you have. I think the app is lots, lots better from where you started with her. Thank you sooo very much for making all those changes. We all know how hard it is to do repeated edits.

I feel pretty comfortable now that she could be a Slytherin. My only suggestion is that you create some sort of balance between the distrustful and vindictive traits you say she has, and the nice person you also say she is. If you can keep it straight in your head when she's nice and when she's not so nice, you'll have a much easier time writing her on the boards.

That being said, I'm going to accept her.

Accepted and sorted to Slytherin.

K

Ok so I just wanted to explain the part of her housemates making her a better person: What I meant wasnt the "good" and "evil", i know that they wouldnt change her into a better person that way. What I meant was: As you all know slytherins think that they were the best of everyone. The strongest, the greatest and so on. and in those two years they have changed her into that person. Sry if i somehow didnt say that understandable.