FAULKNER, Lilyanya Mirya

This is looking good so far!

There are a few things that need doing first, though!

Can you fix your code in places where you've left up the prompts?

Also, can you change the thread title so it's SURNAME, First Middle? Thanks.

Right, in terms of the app it's good, I like it a lot. All I'd like is a bit of detail about how being changed into a vampire effected her.

Also, I'd like the part where she was 'taken' to be omitted or explained a bit better please.

Apart from that we're looking good!

Done I hope i got it how it should be

Hi, Anya! Sorry, but I had a question for you (and you can edit the answer into the app or just explain in a new post if that works) about her history.

See, we try to be careful about certain subjects - like having any disabilities or mental illnesses that people on PA might actually be going through. It's mostly to keep them from having to deal with it here as well as in real life. So, I'm wondering about the kidnapping scenario you put in her history. I understand that you wanted her to be more reserved afterwards, but I'm a little confused as to why the neighbor did what he did. Rather, I'm wondering why you chose to include it in her past. The man did it because he felt her parents didn't punish her for... what, exactly? I may have missed that part. Her and James getting into trouble? Or something else?

I'm just not completely sure about the motivation, which I think is part of the issue when it comes to approving the history part of this app. The kidnapping seems a bit... I hate to use the word "random," but I just don't understand the why behind it. It may be that you choose to take that part out, or replace it with another situation. I can think of several things that would bring about the same result, so if you'd rather just change it, that's fine, too. We'd just need to know so we can tell you whether or not to leave it in -- because of the sensitive subjects bit mentioned in the PA rules page.

Also, this is mostly because I'm curious - her eyes change colors based on mood, you said? D'you mean lighter to darker? Or legitimately changing from, like, green to blue?

I hope this works i fixed the areas in the app

In truth, I'd really rather prefer that the kidnapping incident is omitted. If you still want to enact a change in her temperament then that is fine but I'd like it better if you found something less dramatic for her to orientate her change around.

fixed