Character Feedback......If You Dare XD

I like reading what little bit I have of Avery. Despite what you have posted what I have read she seems to be a caring person and your writing is far better than mine. You seem to plan out what you are going to post and I just tend to go with the flow. I haven't posted with you yet but I look forward to doing so!

Kiera is a classic. I've sat in on a lot of threads in the past and she's one of those I-want-to-squeeze-your-cheeks reads. Very well done. Very sweet. I adore her. (:

Elijah has one of the most solid backstories on PA. His family history is so fleshed out that, not only is a lot of his personality aptly rooted in how his family affects him, but there is always something going on in his life. He's one of those unpredictable characters for me. He seems to really seek companionship, but never can really commit to anyone. His political motives are wonderfully obscure at times, and my characters never know what to think of him. Elijah is one of those characters you just HAVE to pay attention to, because you're never sure what he's going to do.

Lily annoys the heck outta you, and yet you want to cuddle her at the same time. Most people writing depressed, overly sassy characters manage to piss me off completely but I do nothing but love Lily. In spite of not showing a remotely positive side of her for ages, you've still managed to strike a lovely balance. Well done

I'm so glad to hear that. I honestly get so worried writing her, because that's exactly what I'm afraid of. I stopped writing the reasons for her depression and that somehow made it better. Thank you - glad to know my efforts are working.

REID. REID. Ugh. A wonderful mix of Chuck Bass from Gossip Girl and Tony from Skins (the character of his playby) with that big undeniable dose of Kiera. I love the front he puts up, and I love when that front is actually his true colors. He's so unforgiving in his nature, it's beautful. He is such a strong character and anyone who writes with him is, I'm sure, simulateanously excited and terrified. He always seems to be in power, and yet there's a struggle there too. Also, REVIANNA FOREVER.

KIP.

What can I say about this wonderful man? I guess I'll just start with that I actively seek out 90% of Kip threads to stalk read just because I enjoy them. He's intelligent, put-together, and incredibly constant in character. I haven't had many threads with him but I already feel like I know Kip (and get the sense that you've got a much deeper idea/clearer understanding of what's going on in his head than what you put on the page).

Also, your NPCs. You've got so many specifically for this one man and each is developed above and beyond the level of many official characters. I'm just as excited to hear from Kenna or Yuri as I am Kip.

Kip just brings out an interesting side of the characters around him (both yours and other players). I can't wait to write out more Kap and see him in lots of more threads in the future.