Mcdougal, Fiona

Amelia,

You've got some Gryffindor elements for her but I'd like to see you re-examine that piece because she seems more of a Ravenclaw to me than a Gryffindor. The lying as a strength is problematic b/c Gryffindors are known for their honesty. The other thing that is the primary focus of a Gryffindor is the greater good. They are self sacrificing individuals that, while they like fame and notariety, they are also quick to give up their own lives, if necessary for the greater good, and even quicker to throw themselves under the proverbial bus for anyoen they love.

The way you Fiona designed now, she has some of the Gryffindor outgoing traits, etc, but she fits far more into Ravenclaw. As a canon, she is set to be a Gryffindor, though. Please look at this again.

I added a paragraph in personality. Sorry, it's been a long time since I've ever done a Gryffindor character I forget at times.

Its definitely better. That paragraph helped. I think I get where you're going with the lying as both a weakness or a strength, but so I'm clear, please clarify for me how that fits in with a Gryffindor's tendencies for a great deal of honesty. That still is a problem for me for Fiona.

Added a few more sentences to the last personality paragraph and in the Strength and Weakness part.

While there might be advantages to her being able to lie and to know when and how to use it, the compulsive lying bit is truly a problem for a Gryffindor. Gryffindors are pretty much honest people, for the most part.

I will agree to take the app as it is, but the lying is something you'll have to use carefully because it can rather separate her from the true nature of a Gryffindor.

Accepted and sorted into Gryffindor.

I just wanted to add that her mother was a Ravenclaw, she has a lot of her mum's traits. Some traits conflict with each other