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Post by Raven Delora Tue Mar 26, 2013 7:52 pm

Delora, Raven Michelle_Trachtenberg_012

Raven Delora
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INTRODUCTION
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    FULL NAME: Raven Delora

    NICKNAMES: Rav

    AGE: 11

    ALLEGIANCE: Neutral

    HOGWARTS HOUSE: Ravenclaw (or hufflepuff)

    CLASSES: Charms, CoMC, DADA, Transfiguration

    WAND: Willow, twelve inch, Dragon Heartstring, flexible

    PLAY BY: Michele Trachtenberg. Her almost die experience in the rivulet.



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APPEARANCE
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    HAIR COLOUR: [/b brown
    [b]EYE COLOUR:     brown

    COMPARATIVE HEIGHT: tall, more than is normal for a girl

    BODY BUILD: chubby.

    GENERAL APPEARANCE: Raven is a shy girl, and so does she looks. Not marked. Brown hair until her shoulders.


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PERSONALITY
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    STRENGTHS & WEAKNESSES: Raven is shy and insecure girl. If someone say something negative about her she is going more insecure. But if she you shared as a friend she become more nice. And she is smart, but quickly afraid.

    LIKES & DISLIKES: Raven likes silence and reading. The libary is a good place for her. She doesn't like sports and crowd, what makes the Quidditch Stadium her most unlike place. She loves to read Romance.

    GOALS: learning things and becoming teacher, she really likes transfigoration. Make no enemys

    HABITS & QUIRKS: Bites on her tongue if she is nervous, and plays with her hair.

    BOGGART: an angry family lid

    PATRONUS: swann

    DEMENTOR:

    VERITASERUM: a world where she isn't so shy

    MIRROR OF ERISED:

    PERSONALITY: Raven is shy, quickly afraid, smart and serious.



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FAMILY & POSSESSIONS
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    FATHER: Tom Delora, 42 years, pureblood

    MOTHER: Savanna Delora, 39 years, halfblood

    SIBLING/S: Non

    OTHER: Her aunt Sebila is even insecure and shy as Raven, but they are good friends.

    BLOOD STATUS: Halfblood.
    RACE: human

    SOCIAL STATUS: Something between Wealthy and Middle Class,

    PET/S:
    She has a bastatcat named Wil, but he is most of the time away. Nobody knows where.

    OTHER POSSESSIONS:




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CHARACTER HISTORY
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    Early Years: Ravens family was, serious, yes, that is the best word to call it. You may have fun, if you al the other things have done.
    She go to an muggle school, so she has learn on young age to keep secret she is a wizard. Her parents also teach her in magic things. Her best friend was her cat, so she was a little bit of lonly, the cat don't care. The most strange thing ever happend in this part of her life that she almost drowned in a rivulet near her house. Of course she got on her eleven birthday a letter from hogwarts.

    Hogwarts Years:
    They started yet, so there isn't talk a much about.


    Adulthood: and that started not at all




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BEHIND THE CHARACTER
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    ALSO KNOWN AS: gandalfgrijs

    RP EXPERIENCE: one rpg, in the netherlandds

    HOW YOU FOUND US: a was searching for a english rpg.

    MAIN CHARACTER: Non

    PURPOSE OF CHARACTER: having fun, learning better English.

    RP SAMPLE:
    Spoiler:




Last edited by Khaat Lupin on Wed Apr 03, 2013 1:08 am; edited 6 times in total (Reason for editing : I see something what wasn't correct.)
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Post by Jaquellene Jack Dyllan Tue Mar 26, 2013 10:21 pm

You'll want to change your username to your character's name. You can do that on your profile, or you can ask an admin too.

Welcome to PA! Glad to have you here!
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Post by Raven Delora Wed Mar 27, 2013 12:37 pm

I think its done. I graduate this message as testmessage.
EDIT; Yes, it works
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Post by Jaquellene Jack Dyllan Wed Mar 27, 2013 10:18 pm

And do you know who the model is in your avatar? That name goes in the play-by section.
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Post by Khaat Lupin Wed Mar 27, 2013 10:49 pm

Raven,

As we talked, I'm glad you're here, and I'm glad you found your way to getting your character started.

Your app looks good so far. I'm impressed. Yeah, we need the name of the your playby, please, and it looks like you might be a bit stuck with the boggart, patronus, veritaserum, and mirror of erised catagories. If so, please pm me, and I'll be happy to help you with them. You seem like you have a good feel for how you want her to shape up, so I'm sure you won't have any problems finishing those 4 smaller sections.

Her blood status would be halfblood. You might want to put that in there. Your explanation is really helpful, but you might want to clarify that. I know it sounds like we're being really picky, but its really just some polishing. Its shaping up nicely! Keep working!

K.
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Post by Raven Delora Thu Mar 28, 2013 9:20 am

I have chanced my ava, but now it is Michelle Trachter. I shall change the ohter thing you have mention.
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Post by Khaat Lupin Fri Mar 29, 2013 11:09 pm

ok. let me know if you need any help.
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Post by Raven Delora Tue Apr 02, 2013 4:13 pm

I change the things. Is it okay so or have I to explain the things?
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Post by Khaat Lupin Wed Apr 03, 2013 1:14 am

I think its better. And I think you have enough about her designed that you can use her now. I think you'll find that our memberes are friendly and comfortable with working with people who do not speak English as their first language.

I will accept her and sort her into Ravenclaw.

Welcome to PA!
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