Hm...I think we all have the desire to see ourselves in the Potter world. I think that's what makes RP fun. But..a couple things. First, this should probably be a characterization. Not just you immersing your entire true self into one character. I find that is a somewhat dangerous thing to do. If a relationship or a thread does not go well for your character, then if you've personalized your character, as you want to do here, it becomes easy to take what happens on the boards personally.
I would strongly encourage you to think about that before you decide that this is what you really want to do. It has, in the past, gone wrong for other players, some of whom ended up leaving b/c they found playing themselves too painful. I am concerned about you putting so much of yourself onto the boards.
Next, she seems to not fit so much into what I look for with a Slytherin. she has some of the Slytherin traits, but not enough. To me, she seems almost more suited for a Ravenclaw.
Um..and i think you perhaps need to delete sally, brayden and faylen from your list of characters. They are not showing as active right now. All I'm interested in are the ones you have that are active right now. Perhaps I need to clarify the wording on that section of the app.
Thoughts?