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Right. This has potential, it really does, but there are too many holes in the structure of the character for it to be rounded enough to go through.
+ 'Lucifer' - Not only would it be irrational of his father to name his son after the devil, especially if he loathed the boy's birth as much as he seemed to, it is also potentially extremely offensive to some of those on site. So I would like that to be changed both because it seems quite ridiculous on his father's part and to avoid offense. I hope you understand that. He really does not need such a name, though. We're usually quite lax on the naming front, we love the imagination but this one is dicing with death a little bit and no one wants to ruffle anyone's feathers. You can appreciate that, can't you?
+ His weaknesses do not actually make him weak. They don't inconvenience him in any way. I'd tweak that if I were you.
+ Please explain quirk(s) 2 and 3 - also, why the emphasis on him being such a big flirt? Please explain.
I think you might need to tweak his relationship with his father slightly, also. There are odd motivations behind his father's distaste for him and I would like you to expand and explain that. (:
- Eli.