Smith, Callum Robert

Hey man. Just quickly before I look through the app, would you mind if I changed your username to Callum Smith?
I'll read through now

Sorry to dp.

Righto. So. Character looks sound, however we just need a little more written in the longer response sections, such as the General Appearance, Personality, and Early years.

Luckily, as Callum is a first year you don't need to do anything for his Hogwarts years or adulthood sections, as he's not experienced them yet!

So, if you'll just fix those up, add a little detail, make it a little longer, then we'll be all set.

P.S. Just a note. Whilst they're not mandatory, it's generally easier for you and yourself if you have a play by, as it sets a precedent for your character's appearance. Just some food for thought there

Ok. I'll add a little stuff, and you can change my username.

Changed to Callum Smith. I didn't know if you wanted it with the middle name or not. I can change it if you do.

Righto, let me know when you're done and I'll accept the character. Welcome to the site!

I'm done. Here's the form: Good night. I'm going to bed now.
The form:



CHARACTER FULL NAME
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INTRODUCTION
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FULL NAME: Callum Robert Smith First Middle Last name

NICKNAMES:Cal Self-explanatory 

AGE:11 The Year is determined by your age

ALLEGIANCE:Neutral Read more at the Fueding Forces Information thread at the Educational Decrees. Then choose and post here. Type Nuetral if your character has no affiliation. 

HOGWARTS HOUSE:Ravenclaw, Slytherin (Canons state one, Original state two and admins will sort you in one of them. Graduates state ex-house. Durmstrang or Beauxbatons just state your school.)

CLASSES:Charms, CoMC, DADA, Transfiguration, and Potions (Students only. Please choose from Charms, CoMC, DADA, Transfiguration, and Potions. 2 Minimum for Basic students and 2 for NEWTs, or one class and an internship for NEWTs)

WAND:Mahogany, 14 inches, phoenix feather, Very supple. (Wood type, core, length + flexibility) 

PLAY BY: Ian Hecox. (Optional, but recommended. Remember to check the face claim to make sure you're celebrity isn't already taken)

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APPEARANCE
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HAIR COLOR:Brown

EYE COLOR:Blue

HEIGHT:5ft

BODY TYPE: Thin Slender, Thin, Stocky etc.

GENERAL APPEARANCE:Brown hair, Blue eyes, tall for his age. Callum was a popular boy who really liked magic. His favourite spell was Expelliarmus. He also liked having fun riding his Comet his mom bought him for christmas when he was 5. Give a general description of your characters appearance. At least 1 Paragraph

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PERSONALITY
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CHARACTER STRENGTHS AND SKILLS: Smart, Good at magic, Popular 
(At least three)

CHARACTER WEAKNESSES: Physically weak, Gulllible, Low confidence` 
(At least three)

CHARACTER LIKES: Chocolate, Video games, Magic
(At least three)

CHARACTER DISLIKES: Justin Bieber, Swearing, Bullying.
(At least three)

GOALS: To work for the ministry of magic 
(The goals in life for your character.)

QUIRKS: Randomly yelling out breakfast foods, (ie: Pancakes, Waffles, Poptarts, etc.) 
(Some odd behaviors of your character)

BOGGART: Dead family and friends (Characters greatest fear.)

PATRONUS: Discovering I was a wizard (Best Memory.)

DEMENTOR: The christmas tree nearly falling on me (Worst Memory.)

VERITASERUM: My pet is a deadly animal (Greatest secret.)

MIRROR OF ERISED: To be rich (Greatest Desire.)

PERSONALITY:Callum is a normal boy. His parents are sort of rich, but he is not spoiled too much. He can often be seen either practicing magic or riding his beloved Comet.(At least 1 Paragraph of your characters basic personality.)

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FAMILY & POSSESSIONS
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FATHER: Ran away from home when I was 3

MOTHER: Elizabeth Smith

SIBLING(S): None

OTHER:Grandparents, cousins, etc. (Any other important family)

BLOOD STATUS: Halfblood (Pureblood/ Halfblood/ Muggleborn - Purebloods are rarely accepted unless canon)

RACE: Human (Human/ Vampire/ Werewolf/ Part Veela etc. Only members who have been active for at least one month are able to create non-human characters)

SOCIAL STATUS: Middle class (Wealthy, Middle Class, Poor.)

PET(S): Owl
(OPTIONAL. For students only owls, cats, mice and toads are allowed at Hogwarts however you might sneak something else through. Graduates are allowed anything. )

BROOMSTICK(): Comet
(Completely Optional. Make sure the broomstick which you own makes sense. For example, Ron could never have owned a firebolt. For the full list of Brooms, check the ED)

OTHER POSSESSIONS: None
(OPTIONAL)

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CHARACTER HISTORY
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Early Years: At age 5, he was attacked by the Death eaters. He nearly died, but narrowly escaped being killed. At age 8, he accidentaly turned his kitchen table into a pig. When he was born, he had not known he was magic. At age 2, he recieved a toy broomstick, which was destroyed when he was attacked by the death eaters at age 5. (At least 1 paragraph of your characters history during ages 1-11.)

Hogwarts Years: N/A/b] (At least 1 paragraph of your characters history during their stay at Hogwarts.)

[b]Adulthood:N/A (At least 1 paragraph of your characters history after Hogwarts)

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BEHIND THE CHARACTER
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YOUR NAME: Callum Or Alias if you prefer

RP EXPERIENCE: Very good

HOW YOU FOUND US: RP topsite if the answer is google, what you typed in.

OTHER CHARACTERS: N/A

PURPOSE OF CHARACTER: To rp. To ensure deliberate creation of character

RP SAMPLE: Callum walked nervously into the great hall. He sat in a chair and started to take some food to eat.
Spoiler:
 

Yup, I'll accept it. I would've preferred more work on the extended bits though. Still, I can see you've got a good character in mind there.

Sorted into Ravenclaw.