Gamble, Demetri

Well I apologize for the ignorance. I was very unaware that there was a difference, so thank you for clearing that bit up.

How would we go about you helping me reflect his condition?

And he would turn into Demetri which would mean he probably wouldn't be accepted as a auror. He would probably be one running from them and causing them problems.

I want the darkness the lives inside Leigh to take complete control. And it would have to be forever now, since I was unaware of the site rules.

np. those two illness are very often confused. i hear that more than you think! LOL

anyway....if demetri was a whale of a lot stronger than leigh, it may well be that demetri overpowered leigh as the host. it sounds, from what you wrote so far that leigh was the original personality or host) that was traumatized. it might have been that demetri overpowered him or that leigh just did not have the ability to develop enough sense of empowerment in himself that he might have simply relinquished control to demetri.

in that case, then, yes, demetri would be dark, probably far less tolerant and far more reactive to things that he feels he needs to either protect himself from or to "correct" in whatever way he thinks is most appropriate. but then that becomes an issue that he might have developed a different sense of what he believes is right and wrong than perhaps those who haven't been through so much. most protectors dont' run from things as easily as they decide to stand and fight, though.

is that any help?

yes it helps. I'm wanting to go way out of my comfort zone with this character. He does not care about order, he does not care about others, he really doesn't care about anything in the slightest but to feed his addictions; killing and stealing. I want him to be just absolutely crazy (I know he will serve time in Azkaban that was thought out long ago) but with this background. He over came his host and he's mental more powerful because of it.

You see what I'm kinda shooting for? I can write it out it's just going to take some time and readjusting with his background and also to your likings.

it sounds like we're now getting on the same page! do the adjustments and we'll see if we can make this work out.

k.

Yes, no? Is this a little better or does it still need work? I still have a few things to touch up but everything as far as the deep stuff goes is there.

Much, much better. Much more believeable. Let me know when you finish tweaking things and i'll take another look over. It looks like you really have worked very hard on it, and the work shows. Nice job!!

k.

I think that about does it.

Updated.

alright. I'll accept him now. nice work. that was a difficult character to develop.

accepted and sorted into grads.

k.