A Blue Balloon...

Ok, this is a random story I thought of a couple of weeks ago. It's not going to be that long, and probably not that good. I'm not typing it up on word or anything, just here, so there my be some typos. Please tell me if you spot any.

Part 1
Davina was a quite girl. She had long, dark hair and a rather pale face. She was ok at school. She had plenty of friends, as she got on with most people. She was kind and generous, and she had a nice family; although she was an only child. She got average grades in every subject, and fitted in with other children. However, there was something about her, but nobody could tell what it was. She had that look.
One day, she was at her best friend Ingeborg's house. She had stayed over the previous night. The girls had stayed up almost all night, watching films, going on the internet, and talking about everything from clothes to books. Davina lived only five minutes away from Ingeborg, so the girls could walk to each other's houses whenever they liked.
After the girls had eaten, and woken up properly in the morning, Davina had to go home. She didn't want to, she never wanted to, but she knew that she had homework to do, and her mother would be annoyed if she got behind on her schoolwork. At twelve o'clock, Davina left Ingeborg's house.
"Bye Ingie" Davina said, hugging her friend goodbye.
"Yeah, bye Davina. See you on Monday!" Ingeborg replied.
"You might be able to come round tomorrow though, if I get my homework done in time." Davina said, hopefully.
"If you don't get it done, I'll come round and help you. I need to do mine as well, it will be more fun." Ingeborg suggested, although she knew it probably wouldn't happen.
"You know what my mom's like..." Davina said, giving Ingeborg a look, which Ingeborg understood completely, and had expected. "Anyway, bye Ingi!" Davina yelled, as she walked off down the driveway.
"BYE!" Ingeborg yelled back.
Davina walked down Ingeborg's road, daydreaming as she went along. She started planning her English essay in her head, so she would have to do less work when she got home. She turned around the corner, and found herself staring at a hot-air balloon, which was moving along with the wind in the sky. It was strange she had noticed it, as it was almost an identical colour to the sky. She stared at it for a moment, she couldn't help it. She had to turn away from it onto her street, but she looked over her shoulder a few times. She got back to her house, and her mom said "How was Ingeborg's house, sweetie?".
"I had a great time mom." Davina replied, her usual response.
She went up to her room, her thoughts still on the balloon. There was something about it, but she didn't know what.

Completely and utterly random... A.K.A AWESOME! Nice one Jem.

So this story will be about investigating about blue baloon?

Are you going to be on the balloon Jemma? Because that wouold rock!!!

Blue... I LOVE BLUE... Awesome colour actually. PLUS BALLOON. I love balloons also.

Jess. Your crazy. (twoo extrawooooords!)

Yes i know. ((Thhrreee exxxtttrrraaa woooorrrdddsss))

You are both crazy if you ask me!

Lol xD. You crazy bunch. I felt like writing about a hot air balloon. I saw one in the sky the other day, and it inspired me. Lol xD.

OK, update:
Part 2
It was the holidays for Davina, so she spent most of her time mooching around the place, not doing much of anything. She chatted to her friends, went out with them sometimes, went on the computer, watched TV, read her books. What the usual teenaged girl does in her spare time.
The next week flew by, she didn't do much of anything, but she liked it that way. It wasn't until the following Thursday, the previous sleepover was Wednesday to Thursday, that anything interesting happened.
She was going shopping with her friends Ingeborg, Crystal and Lily. They were going to take the train into London, and buy some outfits for Crystal's 15th Birthday, which was later that summer. Ingeborg's mother dropped Davina and Ingeborg off at the train station, and they boarded the train with their friends, as they headed on their way too London.
They had a great day, they spent most of their time in Camden, as the four girls loved the market and the lock. Davina particularly liked a shop called 'Cyberdog', which had futuristic clothes, and was completely out-of-this-world. They also went to Harrods, as Crystal had never been there before, and wanted to go and see it. Davina and Lily didn't like the look of the crowds inside, so Ingeborg took Crystal in, whilest Davina and Lily stayed outside. They were chatting, then Lily began to daydream so Davina looked around at her surroundings. She looked up at the sky, and saw a hot air balloon there. It was barely visible today, as it blended in with the sky so well. Davina stared at it for a minute, until Lily spoke.
"Earth to Dav-ee-nahh! Calling planet Corrispur home!" she commented, chuckling.
"Ohh...what...oh" Davina stuttered, before managing to say "I was just looking at that hot air balloon, see?" She pointed.
"Oh, yeah. That's pretty. So, let's go! Crystal and Ingeborg are done in Harrods." Lily replied, not seeming too bothered about the balloon.
"We better go now, guys, it's five o'clock and we better not stay here too late." Crystal pointed out.
The girls headed to the train station, and took the train home, back to their small village. Crystal had already walked home and Lily had just been picked up, so Davina and Ingeborg were waiting for Davina's mother to collect them. It was whilest they were waiting, when Davina saw the same hot air balloon, going overhead.
"Ingi, look, it's the hot air balloon again. It's following us home!" Davina said, excitedly.
"Oooh, you have a stalker Davina!" Ingeborg said, not taking Davina seriously. "Look, you're mom's here, we should go."
Ingeborg walked off to the car, beckoning Davina to follow her. Davina slowly took her eyes off the balloon, and followed Ingeborg.
They dropped Ingeborg off at her house, and then Davina and her mom got home. Davina was looking for the hot air balloon, and saw it behind her. Davina's mom went inside, not bothering to wait for her. Davina stood outside, watching the balloon. The balloon gradually got closer. When the balloon was directly above Davina, she swore that it paused over her, though of course, nobody would believe her. She got shivers all over her body, but she stayed outside. The balloon moved on out of site, and Davina was still standing in the driveway.
"Come on in, Davina! You're going to get hypothermia* standing out there all day!" her mother called out to her.
Davina quickly ran inside, so her mother wouldn't ask questions.

*Hypothermia = a random disease you get from staying in the cold too long. I'm not sure exactly what it is, but adults always seem to say it over here, lol xD.

Comments? Constructive critisism? This hasn't been spell/grammer checked thoroughly, so point out any mistakes if you see them. All feedback is nice! Except hate comments, but CONSTRUCTIVE critisism is good.