( Cec, I'm going to help you out here. You need to stop having her react to what Elijah's thinking about. She needs to react to his words and actions, not his thoughts. Just take more time on your posts, watch your spelling, read the posts before carefully and make sure to post over the word count -- in that post you didn't. )
Fourteen words made Elijah realise why he'd spent so much time with their cousins and not his sister during his youth. Despite their distance in relation, Harry had always been there. Finn and Euan were nigh on impossible to be rid of and Elisabeth and Adam were comforting to be around in their own ways. Bookish and often misunderstood, the latter, and loud and proud the former. Elijah loved his cousins dearly, certainly more than he did his sister which was a tad concerning for anyone that actually cared.
She didn't care about him either, though. Bloody perfect. He didn't have to feel guilty about it.
"So what, you two are dating?" Elijah asked the brunette. "That'll be another branch to add to the family tree then won't it?"