This app is pretty good, really. But I have a couple questions. Can you fill in some blanks for me?
First, the family ring? I presume its just an heirloom ring? Nonmagical? If it is magical, you need to specify that and also claim it under the Magical Artifacts section.
I understand that he likes to wear a bandage, but I don't understand why. Is it an attention getting thing? What's the deal with it?
If he's a Gryffindor, what do you see are the characteristics of what makes him a Gryffindor? I don't see him as that, really. I see him as more of a Hufflepuff. If being a Gryffindor is an important thing to you, I'd like to see his makeup meet more of a Gryffindor personality, please.
Why does he stutter? Is it all the time, or just under certain circumstances?
How did he end up half vampire? There is no mention of that in his history. You also might list, in parentheses, behind his father's name that his father is deceased. Is mother deceased too or just missing? What did his family do that made them wealthy? If he is a minor, who is his guardian if his mother is dead too? Or is he orphaned? How old is his sister?
I'm honestly not trying to pick on you, but I am interested in your character, and I"m just finding things that make me curious and seem like loose ends to me. So, you might want to check some of those things out.
Oh, and please don't forget we need an RP sample. Thanks!!
Let me know if I can help. I do like your character, and I'd like to see him up and on the boards soon.
K.