Hi, Nefi!
Welcome to PA. I've read your app. There are parts of your character that work for me, but, unfortunately, there is an issue. Because we need to be sensitive to any and all disabilities, we don't accept characters who have them. As such, we don't accept mental health issues here, and, even if it is just suggested in his history, he isn't making sense to me. I need to understand what really is his issue.
He doesn't have any real reason that drives him to do what he does, or I'm not seeing it, anyway. I'm looking for something logical. The history doesn't justify the behavior, and there is very little "normalcy" to him. It needs to fit together coherently. We don't mind a bit of creepy. We're generally okay with that, so long as it fits within the character and with the scope of the Rowlings world.
Can you polish him and lose all the mental health issues--not just the mention of them, but also the behaviors, please? He sorta needs dialed down a bit. If you have questions or if I can help, please let me know.
Thanks,
K.