Hi, Macey! Welcome to PA!
Firstly, I'd like to point out for future reference that you won't need to do the <p> tags on here, which is rather convenient, I find.
Secondly, before I can approve your app, you'll need to add some detail to her appearance section. At least a paragraph is our usual requirement for that part.
However, there are a few areas of your app that will need to be changed before I can accept it. If you need help with any of these, please let me or one of the other Admins know. See, her traits are very strongly on the negative side, but a real person would be more balanced in their personality traits. Could you add a couple on the positive end of the spectrum? I understand that you're pointing out specific areas, but it would be better (and easier for you to write later) I'd she was more rounded in that section.
Also, we cannot approve characters with any sign of mental illness, such as voices in their head. If you want her to be approved, that part can't really be included. If you glance over the rules again, you'll see that we keep those characters restricted because they might offend some of our members.
The only other thing is that I'd like to gently remind you of the site rating, for future reference. The part about her parents is a bit much, though I won't ask that you change it. I just need to remind you that we keep most things like that to a minimum, or rather vague if need be.
But yes. Sorry I rambled a bit there, I do that sometimes. If you need any help or have questions about how to fix it, you're welcome to send a PM my way or to any of the Admins, and we can try and help you sort it out! Hopefully we can get her active right quick.
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