Walsh, Brooklyn

well, I actually need a bit more information in order to sort her properly.

I don't know how she feels about schoolwork. I don't know if she hates schoolwork and avoids it or is a bookworm.

I don't know how she feels about her family, outside of her sister. Is she independent minded? Is she close to her family? Does she follow their family traditions?

Can you give me a bit more info, please?

She thinks schoolworks are a waste of time and it must be illegal because they are boring. She is willing to swap her schoolworks with muggles who wants wizards' schoolworks.

Besides of her sister, she feels mad at his dad.
He always comes home drunk and that makes her mum go shout at his dad. He is always drunk because he is an extreme drinker. When they tried to make their dad avoid drinking for one night, he went nuts. As for her mum, she feels sorry for her because she deals with dad all the time.

Cazz,

I like the foundation you have for her, but I'm having trouble placing her b/c she doesn't really fit into any house, really. I was really hoping I'd see a clearer direction for her with the additional information you gave me. But I'm struggling because she doesn't seem to have the core values of any of the houses, really. She seems pretty self centered. That can work if its developed deeply enough that people really understand how she got that way and what lays beneath it.

We don't see Slytherins as necessarily evil here. We see them as loving family and tradition and loving purebloods--rather conservative wizarding political views.

Gryffindors would be our liberals, but they're also the ones that we see that would sacrifice themselves for someone else or for the greater good.

Ravenclaws are our learners. The book worms and the street saavy folks, and we see our Hufflepuffs as sort of the peace loving loyalists.

At this point, I'm having trouble seeing enough good in Brooklyn to be able to find her strengths. Don't get me wrong. I love darker characters and villains. But we push for those to not be 100% dark and evil either.

She's got a really good foundation, but can you polish her a bit so that we can see more about what her good points are too?

Brooklyn's good points are she's faithful, like when she's in a big trouble, she closes her eyes and before they know it, she is already praying. She is also thoughtful even though she doesn't really shows it, like one time, her friend is at the hospital wing and even though she shows that she doesn't care, she's thinking about her. And lastly, she is confident. She makes her own decisions and such without thinking of others.

okay. that's definitely better. that helps me.

now, just because I tell everybody this, I'll tell you too, but I'm presuming you already know this if you've rp'd before. because she's only 13, her abilities might be good for 13, but they need to be appropriate for her age level. For example, we would not want to see her having mad skills, like an adult wizard, as a third year student.

Also, she needs to be halfblood because the only purebloods we accept now are canon characters.

That being said, I'll accept her and sort her to Slytherin!

Welcome!!

Okay, I understand this And it's fine that she'll be a half-blood.

Thank you