Griggory,Jamie Alexia

I'm so happy to be done

Gus,

This is a good start. But, Jamie doesn't seem like a very much like a Gryffindor or a Ravenclaw to me. There is a little bit of Ravenclaw, but she seems more like a Slytherin.

If you really want her to he in either of the houses you listed her in, add some more traits from those houses please.

~Hit

Okay what about now ?

Gus,

I like her, but I still have a couple of questions. If she's a Ravenclaw, I'd like to see her be a bit more invested, perhaps not in written lessons, but definitely in learning the practical skills in magic. Ravenclaws love learning. That needs to come forward a bit more.

Second, as a metamorphagus, she would not be able to maintain that transformation for a long period of time. Not to change her hair color over the long haul. She would be able to do it for short periods. If you want her to have a hazel color to her hair and to be able to change it, then perhaps she needs to have learned a glamour spell from someone that enables her to make those changes for longer periods. Or perhaps she buys potions, etc., at Slugs and Jiggers that let her color her hair, etc. (like a wizarding hair dye or something) Just saying the metamorph doesn't work over long periods.

I think I'm largely okay with the rest of it.

I hope that that's okay now.

yes. its fine. thank you.

accepted and sorted to ravenclaw.