Nesbitt, Damian

Damian Shaun Nesbitt
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INTRODUCTION
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FULL NAME: Damian Shaun Nesbitt

NICKNAMES: N/A

AGE: 16

ALLEGIANCE: None currently

HOGWARTS HOUSE: Slytherin, uh I honestly can't think of a second.

CLASSES: Potions, Charms

WAND: Oak, Unicorn horn, 6 inches, firm

PLAY BY: Liam Hemsworth

HAIR COLOUR: brown

EYE COLOUR: brown

COMPARATIVE HEIGHT: tall

BODY BUILD: athletic

GENERAL APPEARANCE: Damian has brown hair and brown eyes. He doesn't care much about the clothes he's wearing as long as he's comfortable. He's not the most muscled person around, but he looks athletic. He also looks older then he is because of his beard.

STRENGTHS & WEAKNESSES:
S- Charms
S- Teasing
S- Pranks
S- Being patient
S- Making profit when selling things

W- DADA
W- He's addiction to spice
W- Understanding
W- His real sister, he spoils her
W- Waking up for things on time

LIKES & DISLIKES:
L- Spice and Sugar
L- His real sister, Janna
L- Fighting
L- Dueling

D- His new family
D- Loosing money
D- Quidditch
D- Smart alecks
GOALS: To kill his new adoptive family
To be reunited with his real sister

HABITS & QUIRKS: He likes to count his money in public to show off, whenever he's bored.

BOGGART: His real sister dieing

PATRONUS: When his father was still alive

DEMENTOR: When his father died

VERITASERUM: He accidentally killed his mother

MIRROR OF ERISED: For his younger sister to like him.

PERSONALITY: Damian is an ass. He likes to make fun and bully people just for the Hell of it. He also abuses Sugar and Spice regularly. He's also a con artist. He knows how to rip people off when selling things. He's rather wealthy and likes to flaunt it in front of everybody. The only person that he's ever kind to was his younger sister Janna, who hates him.

FATHER: Joseph Clark /dead

MOTHER: Tess Clark /dead

SIBLING/S: Janna Santelli- Real sister
Sam Nesbitt- Adoptive brother
Sarah Nesbitt- Adoptive sister

OTHER: His adoptive parents

BLOOD STATUS: half blood

RACE: Human

SOCIAL STATUS: Middle class, but he always has a lot of money on him.

PET/S:
optional. students may only bring owls, cats, mice and toads to Hogwarts.

OTHER POSSESSIONS:

Early Years: Damian was born in Venice, Italy. His family was rather wealthy and everything was great. His father was killed in a heart attack soon after his sister Janna was born. He was 2 when this happened. His mother had no job and the family started living rather poorly. When he was 8, his mother was sick in bed. Damian decided to make his mother a get well soon card. She pushed it off to the side because she was to weak that she could barely open her eyes, she was dieing. Damian was furious, he proceeded to choke his mother to death. Unknowing this would kill her, Damian just left the body there. It wasn't until Janna found her mother not breathing, that Damian knew that she was dead. The siblings were shipped off to an orphanage in Britain. Janna was adopted soon after, leaving him alone.

Hogwarts Years: Damian went to Hogwarts. During his third year, Janna told him that she wanted nothing to do with him because of the incident that happened with their mother. Then he turned to drugs. During the middle of his sixth year he was adopted by the Nesbitt family, he hated them instantly.

Adulthood: At least 1 paragraph of your character's history after Hogwarts

ALSO KNOWN AS: Nick

RP EXPERIENCE: A few years

HOW YOU FOUND US: I don't remember

MAIN CHARACTER: Nick Potter

PURPOSE OF CHARACTER: I wanted another character that was a student, but other members played his family.

RP SAMPLE: No! No! No!

We're not very Slytherin yet, buddy.

What we have here is an arrogant Hufflepuff with a superiority complex and a tunnel-vision purpose; his whole life revolves around his mother's murder and the subsequent break up of his family.

He hasn't been written to have violent tendencies and is more of your high school bully at the moment. To kill takes a lot out of someone. To kill your own mother: 100x more. He needs that vicious edge for that to make sense. He's a little too flimsy - again, high school bully. Y'know what I mean?

What's his motivation? He doesn't have a lot of that going on. Apart from his beef with his family, he's totally 2D - he needs to be 3D! Have a read of what it means to be a Slytherin - here.

Bring in more Slytherin traits and explain in more detail what his motivations are. Beyond the annoyance - what drove him to kill his mother? Why does he hate his family so? Why does he want to kill his adoptive sister over anyone else? He has serious issues, it's clear, but it's not entirely clear.

What you have is the making of a very dark character but at the moment he's too "bully-like" and you need to give him that edge.

Here is a list of character traits to help you out. Might be useful.

Nick, if you want to keep this character, please let us know. Otherwise, I'll need to move him to storage until you're ready to edit him.

Thanks,
k.

Yeah, I'm just SUPER busy with stuff right now. I'll try soon.

moving.