Hi, Ellie!
First, welcome to PA! I like your character app for Leonie, but, as Jack mentioned, there are a couple things I'd like to see you polish.
First, do you intend to have a playby? Its not mandatory, but sometimes new people have a hard time getting one posted into the app. If that's a snag for you, (because external links have been troublesome for us) you're welcome to pm Elijah Krum or me and we'll help you get that bit sorted out.
Second, Jack is right. We do our posts here in 3rd person past tense. You're welcome to read any of the posts from existing threads to get a feel for the tone that we use here. Again, if you need help, give me a yell, and I'll be happy to help. If you would please edit your rp sameple to third person past tense, that would be awesome! I know it sounds picky, but it gives us a sense of your writing.
And, yeah. Your character is 15. Her adulthood would not have happened yet, so we would not expect you to complete that section. You are more than welcome to just delete that. Otherwise, I will just ignore that. However, it is very cool to see that you do have an idea of where you'd like to go with her. We also have subforums for events in the past (or in PA time, before year 2025) or for events in the future (ie, after 2025).
These couple of fixes are relatively minor.
You'll find we're a friendly bunch of folks, so if there's something you need, let us know!
And, again, welcome aboard!
K.