GREYSTONE, Autumn Jayde

GREYSTONE Autumn Jayde
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Umm she is talkative and bubbly and can make friends easily
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FULL NAME: Autumn Jayde Greystone

NICKNAMES: just likes Autumn

Age: 15

ALLEGIANCE: potters army

HOGWARTS HOUSE: Hufflepuff

CLASSES: Charms, CoMC, Transfiguration, Divination

WAND: Ash, Dragon heartstring 12 inches

PLAY BY: Vanessa Hudgens

HAIR COLOR: dark brown

EYE COLOR: brown

HEIGHT: 5'7

BODY TYPE: Slender

GENERAL APPEARANCE: she has elbow length hair, she is known for her warm smile and she has a strong willed personality and a sense of justice. Autumn is talkative and can make lots of friends. She wears minimal makeup cause she doesn't care about appearances and is known for her weird yet trendy outfits.

CHARACTER STRENGTHS AND SKILLS:
Divination, Drawing, transfiguration

CHARACTER WEAKNESSES:
She’s too trustworthy, emotions and forgives easily

CHARACTER LIKES:
Animals, food and people (like making friends and just people in general), Lady Gaga

CHARACTER DISLIKES:
Untrustworthy people, cockroaches and liars, too much makeup

GOALS:
To make lots of friends and be the best she can be

QUIRKS:
Fidgets, talks to self at times, hyperactive at times, stare off into space

BOGGART:
Getting tortured

[b]PATRONUS:
Sebastian

[b]DEMENTOR:
Her brother Sebastian getting killed

VERITASERUM:
She secretly wants to die because she was the only one to survive the car crash that killed her grandmother and her brother.

MIRROR OF ERISED:
See Sebastian again

PERSONALITY:
Happy, bubbly, can be a little secretive, friendly, easy going, mischievous

FATHER: Demitri Greystone

MOTHER: Stefani Greystone [nee Allista]

SIBLING(S): Sebastian Greystone

OTHER: Grandmother - Anastasia Greystone

BLOOD STATUS: Half blood

RACE: Human

SOCIAL STATUS: between middle class and wealthy

PET(S)
Tabby Cat named Jules

BROOMSTICK ()
Firebolt

OTHER POSSESSIONS:
Locket with a pic of Sebastian and her grandmother

Early Years: Autumn was born the Demitri who is a wizard and Stefani who is a muggle. She was very close to her Brother Sebastian who died when she was 13; he was 17 as well as her grandma in a car crash. She loves animals and seeks to work with Animals when she is older. Autumn was very good at making friends but only ever trusted Sebastian. Her Grandmother was a huge role model as she and Sebastian usually stayed with her throughout their childhood.

Hogwarts Years: Autumn made lots of friends but was never close with anyone like she was with her brother. She was an average student, only ever getting top marks in CoMA, transfiguration and Divination. Autumn keeps a locket around her neck which is her prized possession with a picture of Sebastian and her grandmother inside

Adulthood: not there yet

YOUR NAME: Eliza

RP EXPERIENCE: I've had a lot of experiences on online games and stuff.

HOW YOU FOUND US: Google, Harry potters army

OTHER CHARACTERS: a lot more and I can’t remember

PURPOSE OF CHARACTER: Because I love harry Potter (well obsessed with it)

RP SAMPLE:

Autumn looks good so far but there are a few things that need to be tweaked first.
+ You'll want to find another picture as the one you have in the app doesn't work.
+ Could you add another house please and be aware that Divination is not a run class with a PC teacher.
+ You'll need to return the code to what it was. You didn't actually need to describe her personality + such where you did as they were just headers for the app. I can give you a hand w/ that if you want.
+ Could you add a little bit more to her appearance please? (:
+ Could you change the personality words into a paragraph or keep them and write some paragraphs under each one -- treat them like headings?
+ Can you go into more detail with her history please because it is quite vague. Why were they in the car? Why was her grandmother there? How has it affected her relationship with her parents...stuff like that.

Apart from that it looks good!

Just to help you, our avatars here need to be no bigger than 150 x 200 pixels. If they are bigger than that, they stretch the board. We will be happy to help you either resize of find another avatar if you need help with that.

Welcome aboard, and don't be afraid to ask for whatever you need a hand with!

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