EFRON, Severus James

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Post by Severus Efron Tue Jul 19, 2011 9:53 pm

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Severus James Efron
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INTRODUCTION
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    FULL NAME: Severus James Efron

    NICKNAMES: Don't have it, everyone calls him by his name

    AGE: Sixteen, 6th year

    ALLEGIANCE: Nuetral

    HOGWARTS HOUSE: Slytherin, Hogwarts

    CLASSES: DADA and Potions

    WAND TYPE: 11 inches long, made of holly, with a phoenix feather as its core.

    PLAY BY: Zac Efron


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APPEARANCE
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    HAIR COLOR: Brown

    EYE COLOR: Blue

    HEIGHT: 5 foot eight

    BODY TYPE: Slender, fit, muscular

    GENERAL APPEARANCE: Severus is quite tall for his ages. Hi has a short brown hair. His eyes are big and blue. He's not too fat or not too skiny. He's muscular and slender. He's always smiling, beacuse he likes it. His skin is dark-skinned, never pale.


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PERSONALITY
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    CHARACTER STRENGTHS AND SKILLS:
    1. Dark Arts
    2. Good at making potions
    3. Very cheerful person
    4. Quick tongue

    CHARACTER WEAKNESSES:
    1. Stubborn
    2. Childish
    3. Sometimes he doesn't understand things seriously
    4. Doesn't like when someone isn't approving his actions

    CHARACTER LIKES:
    1. Magic
    2. Hogwarts
    3. Family & Friends
    5. DADA
    6. Potions
    7. Sweets

    CHARACTER DISLIKES:
    1. Reading books, except he's interested in it
    2. Rude and nervous people
    3. Being forgotten
    4. When someone hates mudbloods/halfbloods/muggles
    5. Hight
    6. Seeing his family hurt
    7. Being alone

    GOALS:
    To become a master of making potions and to become proficient at dark arts

    QUIRKS:
    Obsessed with making jokes, but sometimes it can go bad & Quick tongue

    BOGGART: To become a big failure, dying and losing mom and dad

    PATRONUS: Best memory: Mom and dad, he loves them very much

    DEMENTOR: When his parents got divorced

    VERITASERUM: Just needs somebody to love

    MIRROR OF ERISED: To become sucessful in life, love and work

    PERSONALITY: He has a lot of friends and it's very pleasant to be with him. He loves good jokes and laughing, and of course smiling. His greatest wish is to find someone like him, with whom he could spend the rest of his life, he needs somebody to love. But he's scared that he's never going to find that perfect girl, that he needs. He's romantic, but no one really knows it. He likes to be creative.


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FAMILY & POSSESSIONS
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    FATHER: Austin, he stayed in Toronto

    MOTHER: Ana, Severus is now living with his mom in London. He really misses his dad, but his mom won't let him to talk to his dad

    SIBLING(S): None

    OTHER: Uncles and aunts

    BLOOD STATUS: Halfblood

    RACE: Human

    SOCIAL STATUS: Wealthy

    PET(S):
    Snowy Owl named George

    BROOMSTICK():
    Nimbus 2001

    OTHER POSSESSIONS:
    /


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CHARACTER HISTORY
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    Early Years: Severus was born on October 2nd sixteen years ago in Toronto. His mom gave him name "Severus" after her best friend that passed away few years before he was born. His dad didn't like that so he added "James" in his name after his grandfather that also died. His mom and dad used to fight, a lot and he didn't like it. One day he heard that they're going to devorce and he thought that it was all his fault. He was depressed. When the divorce was over his mom took him whit her to London. There he started whit a new life. One day a strange letter came to his house. His mom read it and in first she thought it was a joke but few days later, the headmaster of Hogwarts cam to their house and explained her all. When he finally turned eleven it was time for him to go to Hogwarts.

    Hogwarts Years: Finally he turned eleven and it was time for him to go to Hogwarts. He was very excited. He was sorted in Slytherin and he was happy with it. He liked Slytherin, even before he went to Hogwarts. From the very beginning his favourite classes were DADA and Potions. He was very interested in it. He didn't like History of Magic, he think it's very boring and irrelevant. Every Christmas holiday he goes back to London to visit his mother. He misses his dad on Christmas. He loves him very much, but his mom doesn't let him to call him and wish him a Happy Christmas. Although she forbids that, he is secretly sending letters to his dad. He's a very good student. Loves magic and want to know everything about it. Never misses classes, does his homework regullary, although he doesn't like it. He has a lot of friend and has a big crush on one of the Ravenclaw's student.

    Adulthood: /



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BEHIND THE CHARACTER
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    YOUR NAME: Tomislav

    RP EXPERIENCE: 1 year

    HOW YOU FOUND US: On Forumotion while I was looking for HP forums

    OTHER CHARACTERS: None

    PURPOSE OF CHARACTER: I don't quite get this... What's my purpose of creating this character or? If it's that then my purpose is that this HP forum is different from others. Others are the same, they don't have life like this, it's usually just to go to Hogwarts, go to classes and that's all. I want to experience a real life of a wizard

    RP SAMPLE:
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Post by Severus Efron Fri Jul 22, 2011 2:24 pm

Finished! Very Happy
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Post by Elijah Krum Fri Jul 22, 2011 3:36 pm

Alrighty! Welcome to PA - first of all. Very Happy
There are a few things that need to be changed before this can be accepted.

+ First of all, we can't have canon surnames. It confuses people. It confused me at first until I actually sat and read this so can you change that please?
+ Weaknesses! You need to balance everything out. Weaknesses are what makes a character - not their strengths, remember that. Those need to be levelled out. Also, Childishness is a weakness - so that's another one.
+ Do the same with likes and dislikes. It's always the most negative of things that make our characters great. I promise you that. :3

Apart from that - unless I spot something else to tweak - you look good to go!
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Post by Severus Efron Fri Jul 22, 2011 4:00 pm

Okay, I've changed what you said. Is it okay now? Wink
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Post by Elijah Krum Fri Jul 22, 2011 9:03 pm

Accepted and sorted into Slytherin!
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