First when I think of a male character being 5'7", and you say he's tall, I don't consider that tall for a male character. Are you sure that's what you want? Also, he doesn't look 57. He looks more like 67. Are you sure that's the right age for him?
Greetings Khat,
Sure he is! Zerekiah is a 5'7 tall wizard, why something wrong with that?
And about the age, sorry my bad
. It must be 67 not 57. Bare with me, I usually got typo. I suspect every single comment or post I have ever published contains spelling errors, missing words, duplicate words and any mistake you can name.
We don 't do a lot of "expert" characters here, so please change that to merely say one of his strengths is dueling and that another is that he is good at the dark arts. We also do not have immortals on this site.
Okay Khaat, I already changed Zerekiah's strengths!
And no need to worry about the immortality. Zerekiah is not an imortal wizard. He just want to gain immortality by studying it but he is not successful with it. He is just a man wishing to live beyond one's natural span and not with the flow of nature. He also want to weave a spell to extend life by drawing life energy from another to sustain the spell, but again, he is not successful with it, and he will never be an accomplished immortal wizard.Never!
Now that I've said all that, let me say I really liked your application. I like your character, and I am delighted to see another strong dark wizard character on the boards. I am anxious to see him interacting w/ others.
Thanks Khaat, you've been most helpful!
I felt like rejoicing when I found this place,I no longer feel so alone.The last few months have been such a struggle,and now I think I may have found my home on the internet . So expect that I will interact with the others.
Brightest Blessings Khaat!