NUTCOMBE, Urquhart

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FULL NAME: Urquhart Nutcombe

NICKNAMES: Hart

AGE: 17

ALLEGIANCE: -

HOGWARTS HOUSE: Slytherin

WAND TYPE: 10 1/2" walnut wood, with a dragon heartstring core wand

PLAY BY AJ Perez

HAIR COLOR:
Black

EYE COLOR:
Black

HEIGHT:
5'6

BODY TYPE: Slender

GENERAL DESCRIPTION:

Hart is a handsome young man with chiseled features, dark hair, and brilliant smile. His eyes are sensuous and radiant like pure diamond which capture every nerves in anybody's mind.It was irresistible, from his clean chin to his familiar bright black eyes eyes. At first impression, he is undeniable a true gentleman with a pleasant and respectable persona, but to those who already know him, they wont take a chance to share room with him because of his bad deeds.

CHARACTER STRENGTHS AND SKILLS:
Hypocritical
Cunning
Good in Potions


CHARACTER WEAKNESSES:
Mischievous
Narrow minded
Boastful
Fear of Insects

CHARACTER LIKES:
Zerekiah Misericordia
Dark Magicians

CHARACTER DISLIKES:
Insect lovers

GOALS:
- To be an animagi
- To follow what Zerekiah Misericordia told him

QUIRKS:

He is not a confident person. When he is dueling or in front of large crowds he get nervous. His hand shake when he do it.

BOGGART:Different kind of insects

PATRONUS: He dont know yet

DEMENTOR: -

AMORENTIA: Magical Pefumes

MIRROR OF ERISED: To be with his biological parents

PERSONALITY:

Urquhart is very mischievous when he was younger. He could be arrogant and boastful, and even bullied other students on occasion. Despite of his good appearance, Urquhart have an "evil sense of humour".

Like his mentor Urquhart, he have a passion in Dark Arts.

FATHER: An unknown wizard

MOTHER: Unknown muggle

SIBLING(S):
-

BLOOD STATUS: Halfblood

RACE: Human

SOCIAL STATUS: Unclassified

PET(S):
None

BROOMSTICK():
-

OTHER POSSESSIONS:
None

Early Years: He is a seemingly ordinary boy who lived in the world of muggles but is unknowingly he is a wizard; she is the true son of a wizard . She was given to a muggle by his squib uncle, from which he received it from his father, and from which he was found alone in the forest abandoned.

Hogwarts Years:Urquhart attended Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. He and his pals enjoyed playing cruel pranks on their fellow students, and even attempted to use Dark Magic on them. Professors of Hogwarts describe that his sense of humour to be very sadistic and did not understand how somebody could associate with someone like him.

YOUR NAME: Aldrin

RP EXPERIENCE: 1 year

HOW YOU FOUND US: Neal a.k.a. Zerekiah Misericordia. He is my best..best..friend!

OTHER CHARACTERS: none

RP SAMPLE: A young man continued to wave his hand until Zerekiah came and he complained, "This thing is heavy did you write a complete set of magical encyclopedias?' And why did you gave me a copy of it?"

Zerekiah just gave him a smile and he opened the door and Urquhart followed him bending down to Zerek's pet Asphodel, dreading a discussions of Zerek's work, "I am not needing it, Hogwarts dont offered Dark Arts courses such as Hexcraft.

Zerekiah put his arms around Urquhart and pulled him close resting his cheek on his silver hair telling Hart that Headmaster Doyle decide to offer a brand new course and Zerekiah bet its brilliant,

"What!?" Urquhart looked again at the heavy grimoire. The title page glared up at him. Zerek felt his body go rigid and flares of distress emanated from him. Zerek's arm around the back of his neck fell away and he slowly lifted the copy of the grimoire, his face darkening.

"The Role of Bugs As a Magical Tool in HexCraft", he read aloud. Putting the book on a table, he carefully squared the edges and stared at the bold print of the title," Merlin's beard!", he exclaimed, his face angry and closed. You're serious about this insane bugs and insect stuffs aren't you?"

Throwing himself down on the sofa, he crossed his arms over his chest and threw one knee over the other. His shoe jerked up and down furiously. The cat leaped up to snuggle close to him and he stared down at him for a moment. Then he looked at Zerekiah with disbelieving dark eyes. 'How could you get mixed up in something like that" he asked tensely.

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This is what I rote here:

https://www.pottersarmy.net/t10473-house-of-hags#284041

Hm. I like your app and how you've written it, but a couple of things. First, he is too young to be a master potioneer. He might be good a potions, but he can't be a master potioneer at his age. Please correct that.

I'd like you to finish the sections on dementor, amorentia, mirror of erised. I'd also like to see more information in your personality sections, and your history sections. I'd like to know more about him.

Also, you didn't answer the question about how much RP experience you've had, nor have you provided us an PR sample.

You have a wonderful start to what looks like a great character. Let me know if you need any help, and I'll be happy to try to help you get this finished so we can get him up and running!

And, by the way, welcome aboard!

K.

Okay I already fix the things you mentioned

Well, you did fix some of them. You still need to fill in the dementor and mirror of erised section.

And you need to write more in the Personality section, in the charcter history section, as well as answering the RP experience question.

K.

Done Khaat!

Try to refresh your PC

Gosh Urquhart!

How did I miss you!

A very warm welcome!

Darren has created a wonderful place here you're going to love it

Hi there,
First of all welcome to Potter's Army.
There are a few things on the application form that need to be sorted before you can be accepted. You must meet the requirements the admin has set forth and this is just to help you.
+ Patronus -- as a seventh year, Urquhart would have already covered the patronus charm or would be in the process of learning it. Regardless of whether it has a form, he should have a memory strong enough to conjure a patronus. If he can't conjure one -- why?
+ Dementor -- although he may have not come in contact with one, he would still (in theory) have a horrible memory. That's something you need to note down for your own benefit.
+ Personality -- that's a bit vague, there must be more t him than that.
+ History -- again, it's a bit vague. Elaborate. If he grew up with Muggles then what were his experiences with other Muggle children, especially when he had random bursts of accidental magic? Etc.
This should help you,
Eli.

Accepted and sorted.

K.