MARS, Saige Troy

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FULL NAME: Saige Troy Mars
NICKNAMES: Mars, Troy.
AGE: 17
ALLEGIANCE: neutral
HOGWARTS HOUSE: Ravenclaw or hufflepuff
WAND TYPE: 12 inch Leprachaun hair
PLAY BY William Moseley

HAIR COLOR: Brown
EYE COLOR: Brown
HEIGHT: 6"5'
BODY TYPE: thin
GENERAL APPEARANCE: Saige is tall yet he is really thin. He isnt thin enough to see his ribs but if he lost about 10-20 pounds then you would be able to. He is really gostly pale and his eyes are a dark dark brown that is black whenever he is mad.

CHARACTER STRENGTHS AND SKILLS:
Charms
Potions
Flying
Basketball
CHARACTER WEAKNESSES:
Hitting on girls
doing good in D.A.D.A and COMC
Making friends
CHARACTER LIKES:
Games
Making potions
Girls
animals
CHARACTER DISLIKES:
Murderers
Animal abusers
Pink and purple
GOALS:
To get a great career In basketball
QUIRKS:
His eyes going black when he is mad
PERSONALITY: Saige is a nice, Cool, atletic guy. He always messes up around girls though when it comes to hitting on them. He Hangs out with people who play sports sometimes. Saige helps when he is needed and is pretty smart. Most people would love to be around him because of his love for animals.

FATHER: Jason Mars
MOTHER: Sandy Lye-Mars
SIBLING(S):
Jenna Mars (2)
Jazmine (21)
Sara (2)
Sally (2)
Jack (17)
Scarlet(10)
Star (20)
Josh (21)
Jessie(to be born)
Shelby(to be born)
BLOOD STATUS: Half blood
RACE: Vampire
SOCIAL STATUS: Wealthy
PET(S):
Snuck a wolf pup

BROOMSTICK(): Nimbus 2001

Early Years: When saige's mother was pregnant they said they were to have a boy and girl. some how the thing messed up and ended up having twin boys. Saige was the youngest by 2 minutes and the parents already had names picked out for their twins so he got a girls name while his twin got a boys name. At the time his sister Jazmine and his brother Josh were 4 and his sister Star was almost 3.

As he grew to the age of 7, He had his first little sibling and ended up not being the youngest. At that time, Scarlet was born. She was the second one besides 10 year old star to be born without a twin or triplet.

He went to school to become a great athlete and he played tennis football basketball soccer and basketball But as he got better at basketball he learned that he wasnt as good as he thought he was at the other sports. Those were his favorite games. He knew he was a wizard as soon as he was 10. But he knew his father was a wizard since he was really really little.
Hogwarts Years: So far Every school year for Saige has been awesome. He got to play quidditch one year and got to make many many different friends. Every year for holidays he could stay at the school except when he was 15 he had to go home to meet his 3 little sisters who were born the day before halloween. He does really good in potions and Charms and did terrible in D.A.D.A and COMC

YOUR NAME: Rora (Aurora)
RP EXPERIENCE: on the day after valentines day it will be 1 year
HOW YOU FOUND US: im a member
OTHER CHARACTERS: Aurora Remembrance blake Prison Mitchel and Rodgey

I'd like to see you make him a bit more down to earth. I think you're going to find that making characters that are good at so many things become a bit difficult to control. I think its a natural tendency in sites like this to try to do that, but i think if you make him a bit more human you'll be happier with him and have more fun with him. It also gives you a lot more options creatively with him the more down to earth Saige becomes.

Try, for example, having him only good at maybe one sport or two. And I do know that the eye changing thing is a difficult thing to use. Your posts need to be from his point of view, and nobody really is that aware of whether their eyes are changing in some way or another. Not really. The only way Saige would know if, in a situation, his eyes were changing is if he were looking in a mirror when it happened.

Does that make sense? I'll be happy to help if I can.

k.

Okay so i changed it to where he used to play so many sports but learned he wasnt as good as he thought he was at those except when it came to basketball.

For the eye changing thing, i think it would be hard to use but.... Remember how Aurora has visions and flashbacks and can hear thoughts sometimes.. thats alot harder to use and im doing pretty good with it.. so i could make it to where his eyes start hurting and thats how he knows that they changed black..

Nah. That's probably not a good thing. Changing the sports thing does help a lot. I'll let you try it as it is for now.

Accepted and sorted in to Hufflepuff.

k.

sweet thanx